Snow White And The 5 Deers

One  cold evening in DontGoBack Drive a little girl was born. ‘What should we name her?’’ the girls father asked. ‘’Hmm, Her face is white as snow’’ Said her mum admiring her daughter. ‘Let’s name her White Snow’’ The dad said. ‘’Yes! That's a fantastic name’’ The girls mother said. ‘Or even Snow White!’’ she said. ‘’White Snow or Snow White?’’ he asked. ‘there is one person I think we will need to ask, Tivi the witch of Revenge’’ The mum said. ‘’But isn’t she a witch. Evil’’ The dad said. ‘No, Yes but still she helped me get my job, and let me study, Without her I wouldn’t know where I’d be, In the rubbish Bins, She got me and raised me to become who I am now’ The mum said. ‘Wait, But wouldn’t she forget you? Its been about 20 years since she left you to figure your life’’ the dad said. ‘It has been a while, but she will, I was like a daughter to her and I must tell her the news, she will be proud.’’ the mother said. ‘Um, okay, but If it doesn't go as planned do not blame me cause I am just telling’’ the dad confirmed. They both walked towards the Witches tower clinging their daughter to their shoulder. ‘’Um, guess we are here’’ The dad said. ‘’Um, I will knock’’ the mum said. ‘knock knock knock’ ‘’Who is it’’ a low voice said. ‘’Um, Anne, Madam’’ The mum said. ‘’Who dares enters my house! I will cast a spell on yours tiny... thingy that's, um on your arm and on that's 16th birthday it will be pricked by a needle and will sleep forever!’’ The witch said. ‘’No, No, Majesty Tivi, You remember me? Anne, you got me when my mother vanished’’ The mum said. ‘’You will now leave! Leave forever!’’ yelled the Witch. ‘’Hmm, Guess who’s right again’’ the dad said. ‘Oh! I can not let this happen!’’ The mum yelled. ‘’If Tivi plans something, she will never give up! We must not let our daughter ever feel pain! We must send her to the woods and the deer's, Rabbits and birds will help her! Lets send her’’ The mum said. ‘Fine with me’’ the dad said. ‘’Okay’’ The lady said and threw her daughter into the woods and left.


 The baby cried willing her mum and dad will come but they never came. That night the baby was very sleepy and slept dreaming of her parents. ‘‘Look! Whats that? Is it a human?’’ The father deer said. ‘’Yes, I think it is, it has no parents’’ The mother deer said. The baby cried and cried. The birds woke up. ‘’Oh no! Lets help that child!’’ the parrot said. ‘’Yes’’ The green budgie said. They deer's rushed to help the baby so did the birds. The 2 deer's pushed the baby on the other deer's back and the birds and rabbits made a den for the kid to sleep in. ‘We will take care of this’’ The deer said. ‘’Okay, thanks’’ The rabbits said. ‘’Okay. we Will visit’’ the birds said. ‘’Look, The kid looks so white and doesn't even have a hint of tan,’’ The father deer said. ‘’Yes, Its so rotten! Looks like garbage! Nothing like our children’’ the mother deer said, ‘Lets call her Garbage White ’’ the father deer said. The mum agreed. ‘What's that?’’ Asked Wonderful the oldest child. ‘’Yea?’’ said Beauty the 2nd oldest. ‘Is that our new flat mate?’ Asked Gorgeous the Youngest child. ‘Yep its your new flat mate’’ the male deer laughed.


 The 5 deer's took great care of Garbage White and treated her like their own child. When she was13, she started helping in the forest. Her roll was to clean the forest. Even though nobody wanted to do it before, but when she did the jobs she sang and dance, soon most people happily volunteered to help. She was now 15, Her birthday was coming in 3 days. She was very happy with her life their and there was no worry for her.


 Snow White’s parents lived in misery ever since they lost their child. Her dad lost his job. Her mum became lazy. All they did was ask each other ‘’How do you think Snow White is doing?’’ They’d ask. ‘’Fine’’ The other will say. All they wanted was a good future for thee child. One day a letter came. Snow White’s dad opened it. This was the first ever letter they got in 7 years.

 20/8/13 22
 RedRicKRock
 Fine Valley road

 To Anne and Jarred

 We, The Red Fox club thank you for your support in donating in the annual RedFox day competition and would like to congratulate you for getting 3rd place in The RedFox Running comp. Here you will be given a chance of a lifetime. 1 Million dollars will be at your doorstep at 23/8/13. We thank you for your help and hop to see you soon. 

 Sincerely. 

 RedRickRonny 


 ‘’Oh! Did you see that! We got 1 million bucks!’’ Snow white;s Dad Yelled. ‘’Wooo!’’ Anna yelled. They soon moved out of there flat to a 6 bedroom house with a massive pool. They were soon living in paradise! Anna and Jarred cared less and less about Snow White and on day, they didn’t even know who she was.

 As for Snow White she lived in joy with her family, Peace the female deer, Faith the Male deer and their 3 children Wonderful, Georges and Beauty. Snow white became family to the deer's. One day when snow white just woke up she saw a light. She felt so magical. She heard the sound of a horse trotter. Vines were getting cut, Who was there to see her? Snow white looked high and low. Soon a clearing came out. It was a human. Snow White had hardly remember the first time she saw a human. The human walked towards her and said, ‘’Who are you? ‘’ The human asked. ‘’Um, Glowing Garbage’’ Snow white said a she blushed. The human just laughed. He looked like he was the same age as her. ‘’Well I am Shay’’ He said. ‘’Um, So you like here, right?’’ he asked. ‘’Yes I do’’ She said. Finally some one knew that. ‘’Well, such a bad name for a very pretty girl’’ he said. ‘’Um, The dears chose it’’ she said. ‘’Dears? You know the deers’’ he exclaimed. ‘’Well not precisely, but yea, it um like. Magic’’ she said. ‘’Well where are the deer's? It’s been a log time since I have met them’’ he asked. ‘’I will go get them’’ Snow White said and ran to the Deer's. She told everything that happened. The deer's walked out side. ‘’Oh! You’re back!Its been a long time. Whats the name?’’ the female deer asked. ‘’I am Shay RedRick ’’ he laughed . ‘’Hmmm, Names these days are very unusual’’ the Female deer said. ‘’Dad? Whats going on?’’ Wonderful asked trotting along her siblings. ‘’Nothing much, You remember him, Right? He came when you were a little baby’’ the Dad deer said. Wonderful and her sibling smiled. ‘’Um, I wanted to ask, um, why does a human girl live with you?’’ He asked. ‘’When her parents dumped her here. We couldn’t leave her all alone, it was getting dark, Plus she grew up to be a very great child’’ The mum deer said. ‘’Don’t you wish she could explore the town? Make new friends, get a job, I can show her around and I will give her back to you’’ he said ‘’Well we have known you and your father for a long time, Garbage? Would you like to go, Explore your true home? The deer's asked. ‘’Well, you know them, I’ll just go’’ Glowing garbage said. ‘’Okay, up to you’’ The deer's said. The three baby deer's said bye, they all hugged and left snow white to go to Shay. Snow White has never seen any humans and was a bit nervous seeing one. ‘’Um, Where do you want to go?’’ he asked, ‘’Um, I, Um, the place where humans live’’’ she said. ‘’Um, Humans live around all places all around the country’’ He said. ‘’Um, a human you know’’ She said. ‘’Um, I live with my dad, RedRickRonny, That's his stage name, I call him dad or RedRick or RedRonney or RickRonney or..’’ he said while Snow white was laughing really hard. ‘’So take me there’’ she said. ‘’Kay’’ he said and they both trotted of.

 For her parents they were chatting to RedRickRonny about the new comp. ‘’Hi dad’’ Shay said with Snow White. ‘’Oh! Who is this?’’ RedRickRonny asked. ‘’Um, Remember those deer's you helped? Those deer's took care of her and told me to take her out here for a while’’ he said. ‘’Wow! She is so beautiful! Skin as white as snow! Big blue eyes, Just like our snow white’’ Snow white’s mother said then started sob. ‘’Oh, Are you alright? ‘’ Snow White asked her mother. ‘’yes! Now I know! She was from the forest right? And how old are you? ‘’ she asked. ‘’Um, 17’’ Snow white said. ‘’According to my calculations our daughter must be 17 too! ‘’’ The dad yelled. ‘’You are our daughter!’’ the said hugging her. ‘’Woop! ‘’ Shay grumbled. ‘’So, Y-YOU ARE MY P-P-PARENTS! ‘’ Snow white yelled. ‘’Yes! !Yes! yes!’’ They all yelled and hugged each other tightly. ‘’Oh! Snow white! Tivi’s spell didn’t work! Snow White PLEASE STAY HERE WITH US! We beg you our long lost child!’’’ The dad said. ‘’But I must go tell the deer's and Wonderful, Beauty and Gorgues’’ Snow white said. ‘’Go Snow white and show us these amazing deer's who took care of you!’’ The Mum exclaimed. ‘’Who’s snow white? ‘’ Snow white asked. ‘’you! You! What did they call you there!’’ exclaimed the mum. ‘’Glowing Garbage, the kids called me Glee Glee sometimes’’ Snow White said blushing. ‘’Oh! What a dreadful name! But we must go to thank these deer's get the presents’’ The Dad said. ‘’kay, I will take you guys their and soon maybe snow white can come with me to town, go shopping maybe’’ he whispered and got his horse and went. When they reached the forest snow white showed her parents her home and introduced them to the deer's and their children. ‘’Please take whatever you need you have given us more than what we wished for’’ the Mum said. ‘’NO,NO! You have already gave us your child to stay with us for years and years and that's the best gift of all but one thing you could do is let her visited every week?’’ the Dee rs asked. ‘’Yes! Yes! More like daily!’’ the mum said and thanked them and they went to their home. ‘’Lets go to the mall’’ shay said and they went. Soon they lived happily ever after.


The End. Told by Wonderful the deer, retold by P.L

My Teacher Machine

I couldn’t believe I had a chance to make my perfect teacher! I looked towards to the magical teacher machine thinking of what i’d say. I started saying what wanted my ultimate teacher to be like. 


 ‘I would like my teacher to be an average height, not to short and not to tall. I want her to have long black smooth hair with a shade of brown and have emerald green eyes. She will be wearing a black shirt of glowing cat eyes and a grey leopard printed pants. She will be wearing long golden earrings in the shape of a three and wore lots of gold bangles on her hands. She will have black shoes with bright white laces and in her hands she will have a brown short-haired cat with glowing blue eyes with a black collar which said ... in gold and a green stone which looks like a real emerald. She will be patting her cat when I walk in and ask if I’d like to pat the cat.

 My Perfect teacher will have to be very kind, caring and thoughtful. I would like my teacher to be kind, for example, If I Don’t understand a writing strategy I would like her not to get angry and teach me again and go through the steps carefully and make sure I understand. My teacher machine will be a fun and happy teacher. 


 I would want her to have fun when she teaches and not get bored. I would want her to be funny and tell jokes and teach me lots of fun and y easy ways for me to learn. I would like her to teach me new ways of studying like instead of researching about a dog, bring a real dog for the day. I would like the teacher machine to do lots of fun things like art and music. I don’t want her to be too funny and happy and not worry about problems but to relax and be a great teacher to the students.


 Another quality I would want my teacher to have is to be very Encouraging and supportive. For example, If They put me for a level group and Its too hard I would want them to tell me that I can do it and support me if I make a mistake. And if I wrote some writing I would like them to give me lots of feedback of things I did well and things I need to improve on and support me with it. I want her to encourage me in a good way and not force me to do something I would not want to do. I want her to tell me ways that I can be more better at things like getting a faster time for basic facts or ways I could use wicked words.’

  'My teacher machine will be understanding and trustful. I would want her to understand me and be someone I can trust when I need to tell something. For example if I see somebody Stealing something I would want the the teacher to understand me and trust that I am telling the truth. I want my Teacher machine to be thoughtful and think about if something is easy or hard and help me if its too hard for me.'

'I would also want her to be caring and care for me and not ignore me. I would want a kind, caring and helpful teacher. I would like her to love wild animals. I would want her job to be a wild animal researcher and a teacher and go on lots of journeys with animals and tell the class about her latest discoveries and share her understanding about animals to me.' 

I would want her to teach lots of things about animals and never do anything bad to animals. I want her to have 2 cats and to dogs. Now I have told what I want my perfect teacher to be like, Trusting, Fun, Creative, Challenging, Interesting and thoughtful. I wonder how the year will be? 

5 people

‘Dad! Come watch me!’’ Emerald said doing a new dance she

learnt in  school, ‘Wow!’’ Her dad Tommy exclaimed. ‘Blue, come! One day you’ll be good enough to dance like this’’ Tommy said joyfully. ‘No, I really  don’t like dancing. I can rather spend my time ... Look their is a duck! I’ll get bread to feed it!’’ Announced Blue ignoring  Tommy and walked away.

Emerald looked at Blue who was busy looking at a hummingbird fly the the trees and eat bread which Blue had given her. Emerald walked over to Blue and said ‘The bird so dosen’t like bread’’ Emerald said. ‘’Well according to my books they do. I have many many many reasons but you are not interested in animals so you won’t understand.’’ Blue said trustfully. ‘Uh! But I got 10/10 in t-the fashion competition. ‘Being good at fashion does not mean you will be good at....  knowing if birds like bread’’ sneered Blue. ‘’But still’’ said Emerald  walked inside their home.

‘’Emerald, Shark! Blue and Eight come to dinner!’’ said Tommy. ‘Dad? Can I ask you a question?’’ Shark asked doubtfully. ‘Sure!’’ Tommy said gladly because his son Shark never asks him questions. ‘’You know Blue and Eight moved in.... Yea. Isn’t this house to crowded for 5 people to live in? Maybe They both should leave. Its too squashy. You care about Emerald and me right?’’ Shark said hurriedly. ‘’Shark, Don’t you see they don’t have a home? Plus we have plenty of room here’’ Tommy said.  ‘Really?’’  Emerald asked. ‘We only have 2 bedrooms, 2 bedrooms! And only two beds! And we have to take turns sleeping on the floor?’’ Emerald said trying to be smart.  ‘’Emerald! Don’t be mean’’  hissed Eight. ‘Yea! Emerald is correct’’ declared Shark. ‘’Stop!’’ Blue said with a bag of bread in her hands. ‘’Just eat, we have got 2 pieces of bread and  4 eggs and um lets see 2 cucumber’’ Tommy said. ‘’I want egg, bread and cucumber! Its saved!’’ Shark said. ‘No we all need to eat’’ Tommy said.  ‘I ‘ll sort it out’’ He said.  ‘’Okay Emerald you get a bread and a egg, Shark you get a egg and a cucumber, Blue you have a egg and a cucumber, Eight you get a Bread, And i’ll have egg’’ Tommy said. ‘’Ewww! How do you expect me to eat a Cucumber with Eggs!’’ Yelled shark. ‘’Well, Blue is eating it’’ Tommy said. Shark grabbed his plate and sat furiously. ‘’Um, I think we need to get more groceries.’’ Blue said. ‘Okay then here, all of you get $3.20 each.’’ Tommy said. ‘’Oh! We always get bad stuff’’ Emerald said snatching the money. ‘’Emerald don’t be mean to Tommy’’ Blue and Eight said.

When they got there  they shopped a few items, Shark got help with his maths. They were excited when they got home. Blue was most happy.  ‘’Okay put your things in the fridge.’’ Tommy said. Emerald bought a muffin for $2.50 and a lolly pop for 70 cents. Shark bought A Cookie for $2 and bought a 5 pieces of sushi for $1.20, Eight bought 4 apples, 3 mango’s and a lolly pop for $3.20 and Blue bought bird seeds, and 5 peaches for $3.20 cents. ‘’Emerald you wasted $3.20 for food that will only last 24 hours!’’ Blue said.  ‘’But you bought Bird seeds for $2.50!’’ Emerald said. ‘’But the budgie will be hungry and plus,I bought fruits’’ Blue said very truthfully. Emerald bit her muffin and before they reached home the pink frosted muffin was finished. ‘’Told you’’ Whispered Blue to Emerald.

‘’So. Shall we play?’’ Shark asked Eight.  ‘Um, Okay then!’’ Eight said freely knowing that Shark would not ever ask to  play unless he had a plan to make Eight loose, but Eight always wins even if he  purposely runs slow he always wins so Eight just went with it.

‘’Okay when I say go we both run and get those bags and run back and who ever goes first in  the ULTIMATE winner’’  notified Shark having a very mean plan in his mind. While Eight clearly knew that Shark had another very mean plan in his mind and Eight did not mind a bit. ‘’Okay ready steady go!’ yelled shark already half way through the line cause he ran before he had said ‘Go!’ Eight ran and like always won once again with Shark feeling ashamed as always...


To Be Continued

Weird Water 3

Previously on Weird Water 1:

 They were sad that some days they didn't eat. They  then realised that it was their fault she went. They should have believed her. Their  parents read the note over and over and then found a pattern.

 ''He's the Mayer!.'' Said the dad. They both rang some friends to help find Tagg Piep.

 ''Don't worry from now on we are all trying hard to find your daughter! No matter what we will find her!'' The dads sister said.

Previously on Wierd Water 2:

They all yelled. Sue saw her daughter Aqua standing on the Hill. ''AQUA!'' Sue screamed. ''Mum'' Aqua said carelessly. ''Stop the car! Aqua jump!'' Sue yelled. Mouse stopped the car.

Aqua sat quietly while Mouse drove the car. Mouse parked the car in the petrol station and sighed deeply. ''Aqua, Its not your fault. We'll get home'' Mouse explained. Aqua said nothing while Mouse drove past the steep hill and through the wide avenue, in 5 mins they reached their home.

Aqua ran up to her room and couldn’t sleep cause she kept worrying about her mistakes. Mouse knew he shouldn't disturb his daughter so he sat down. He was still worried about Sue, but he didn't want to remind himself of what had happened. So he sat down and read the newspaper.  When he read the headline of the newspaper his mind started to tremble with anger. He couldn’t control himself and  forced himself out the door without thinking about  his own daughter.

Aqua just couldn’t sleep. She remembered her  mum and looked sadly at the pictures of her and her mum. Tears fell down her eyes as she thought of his horrible choices. She knew that her mum wouldn't survive the was she did, No one will find her mum. She knew her father thinks its not her fault but Aqua knew it was.

She knew that she couldn’t keep it a secret anymore, she had to tell someone. She liked her dad much more than her mum so she decided it was the  perfect time to tell him. She walked down proudly because she knew her dad would trust her and will not get angry. She walked towards her dads table, but  he was not there. 'Dad!' she called. ‘’Dad! Are you here!’’ She said. She looked around the house, he was nowhere to be found. Then she sat down sadly.

‘’Hello? Wake up its morning now!’’ she heard  a voice which sounded like a female. ‘’What’’ Aqua asked. Her eyes blured and she was so confused. All she could see was a green shadow and a purple, blackish back round  in front of her eyes. ‘’What?’’ she mumbled again. ‘She can’t talk properly’’ said the voice.  ‘’Oh? OHHH! Yea! I knew I had learned this in human biology’’ said another kid voice. She rubbed her eyes.‘’Human biology?’’ Aqua wondered.  ‘’Yes! She is getting well now!’’ told a  voice which sounded like a male. ‘’Well?  Me? What!?’’ Aqua said. ‘’Um, sir!’’ said a voice of a kid. ‘’Should I write what the human is  saying in my book?’’ the voice of a kid said. ‘’Yes yes. are you listening all of you must write this down!  Finding a  human is very important and rare. You get a chance to study it! Use it with Respect!’’ The man voice said. ‘’Yes sir’’ said a lot of voices. ‘’What!’’ mumbled Aqua.

She rubbed her eyes and took a step forward.  ‘’Aaaah! The humans Alive! Security push it back! Kids put your oxegen mask on! Hurry!’’ yelled the lady voice. She took a look it was Aliens! A school for aliens.  Suddenly something pricked her arm and she fell down. A Alien towered over her she banged her head when she was falling so she can’t see clearly. She looked at the wierd shadow and once again and  fainted.

So forgetful 4

The wing blew harshly against their faces. That night when they all returned home to eat dinner  the mum said something exciting, ‘I have been thinking about something lately, when you guys went to places and stuff, I  think something has happend, Something big! We need a dog! ‘’ She said. ‘’Why?’’ The boy asked. ‘’Really! Can we we please have a husky’’ Begged the girl being very Perky. ‘’No, No, Don’t go to far. What?’ The guy said. ‘’Yea, I just think my lucky  pendant got stolen last night, You know the one, silver one’’ The mum said. ‘Well, you have many sliver pendants’’ the Dad said. ‘’Yea’’ agreed the boy.  ‘’Um how can I discribe it. Um , I know! The one Charlotte used to play with. Oh No! Where is Charlottle!’’ Screamed the Mum. ‘Charlotte! I almost Forgot! The dadremembered, ‘I think.. Um... I don’t know.’’ The boy said. ‘’Where is she?’’ Said the girl. ‘’What! You lost Charlotte! She was the best child we have had! How could you’’ The dad said.  ‘’Um, We are listening’’ The girl corrected. ‘Dont’t ever blame me!’’ yelled the mum. The dad sighed, then there was a awkward silence.

Nancy Drew - Secret Identity Quiz

Shape Poem - Cats

                                                                                 Big                                              Paw

                                                                      Cute                                            Purr

                                                                               Chubby                                     Fluffy cat

                            Small eyes                                 Green eyes

                                                                 Long whiskers                             Rough Tongue

                                                                         Angry, aggresive, A+ Power, Never give up!                                     

                                        Range of colours, meowing if they are happy

                                                                Sharp, Scratchy ears rubbing to the fence

                                                       Sleeping all day , licking their clean fur

                                                        Playing in  small cardboard box. Toys!

                              They always land on 2 feet, never

                                                                                 break a leg, small or big cats!

                                                                                  Black or white, still great pets

                                                                                  White, grey, white, even blue!                                                                                          

                                                                                               Fluffy or smooth

                                                                                                     Cats!

Because of Winn- Dixie Presentation

My pet fish

My Pet is a fish. Its a goldfish and its name is Chippies. I named my fish chippies because I wanted to name my fish to have a name which is something unusual and interesting. I am not sure if its a girl or boy. Chippies has been my pet for 1 year and about 2 months. My pet fish lives in a tank. Chippies lives with my sisters fish which is a black fish with huge eyes. Chippies and the other fish like chasing each other and swimming around the tank together. I like Chippies more because I think the other one is a bit lazy. The tank has 1 tree and blue stones. My pet fish got sick once when We went overseas. The people who took care of it fed too much food and it got sick and they didn’t even tell us. Finally we bought this thing that we pour in the tank to take the sickness away. When I feed my fish it catches the food, the other fish never gets the food while its sinking. Whenever I walk past the tank Chippies comes and follows me. If I put my hand/finger In the tank it comes and nibbles it. It sometimes tickles. Only my fish does it. My pet fish is a great pet! It can do so many cool things other goldfish don’t do. I really like my fish. I wonder what is it going to do today?

Deltora Quest

Deltora Quest is a book about 3 people called Lief, Barda and Jasmine who go on an adventure to save Del. 

There are 8 books in the deltora quest series , The Forest of Silence, The lake of tears, The city of rats, The Shifting Sands, The dread mountain, The Maze od the Beast, The vally of lost and Return to del. 

The quest they are on is to find The  7 gems of the magic belt of  Deltora. They had been stolen by the Evil shadow lord and it was up to Lief to find it. The gems in the magical belt of deltora are: The great Ruby, the golden Topaz, Opal, Lapis Lazuli, Emerald, Diamond, Amethyst. There is a cool thing about the word Deltora cause D is for Diamond, E is for Emerald, L is for Lapis Lazuli, T is for Topaz, O is for Opal, R is for Ruby, And A is for Amystest. The word Deltora is created of two places Del and Tora. Each Stone has a power which helps in certain ways. The Topaz, symebel of Faith, It has the power to connect to the spirit world, The ruby, has the power to change colour when there is danger and and cures snake bites, The Opal is the gem of hope, The Emerald, Stone of truth, The lapis lazuli is a heavenly stone,  The diamond will cast loneliness and sadness if you get in with greed or trick. and gives coarange and strength. The Amyest  Calms and soothes. With all the gems together it will cast power enough to defeat your enemy.

Leif was joined by a guy called Barda who is a friend of his parents and was told to go with him because  because they wanted to protect their son. They were given a hand drawn map of the shadowlands of Deltora to guide them . They first went to the forest of silence and met Jasmine, a girl who has lost her mum and lives alone. They face horrifying beasts, monsters, Evil Shadowlords and Evil children  along the way.  

My Favourite book was The Valley Of The Lost. The series does not end with Lief defeating the Shadow lord, In fact Lief never even Meets him through the whole series. But Lief finds his real parents. 

There is also the 2nd deltora series which continues there adventure, Its called Deltora Quest 2 and their is the 3rd Deltora series too, its called Deltora Quest 3. 

The author is Emily Rodda. She also wrote: The key to Rondo, The the wizard of Rondo,The battle for rondo, The Golden Gate,  The Silver gate, Rowan of Rin, The land of Dragons, The Deltora quest of Monsters, The Ultimate Deltora Quiz book.




For younger readers: Something Special, Dog tales, Pigs might fly,  Fairy Realm

Its a great series and I hop you enjoy it.

So forgetful part 3

‘’ Okay’’ agreed the girl. They both tucked in the bed and slept. The next morning something suprising  happend. ‘ Look! Look! Ice cream!’’ shreiked the girl. ‘’ This one says my name!’’ the mum said and carefully opened it. ‘’ Yum! Strawberry! My favourite!’’ exclaimed the mum. ‘Please be chocolate’’ begged the girl and ripped her ice cream. ‘’Cookies and cream!, my 2nd favourite’’ she exclaimed happily. The boy ripped his. ‘’ Yay! Lime!’’ he cheered. ‘’ I think yours is vanila’’ the girl said. ‘ Hmm. I think its raspberry’’ their mum said. ‘’ I think its... hmm, chocolate’’ the boy said. ‘ I think its lime!’’ the dad said. ‘’ He ripped it. It was cookies and cream. ‘’ Oh! I wish it was lime!’’ he said. They all laughed. ‘Can I have mine?’’ asked the girl. ‘’ Sure!’’ the dad said already eating his.

The boy laughed and they mum giggled quietly. ‘Mum! When are you going to eat yours? the boy asked. ‘Right... now!’’ she said. They all ate their  ice cream. ‘ You ‘re lucky!’’ the boy said to their mum. She laughed. ‘Yum!’’ the mum said as she ate a bit of the girls. ‘Yours taste’s better than mine! the girl said to the dad. ‘’ Yum! he said. ‘I’m so lucky! The boy said. The girl giggled.

They mum went and played on her piano. They girl sang. The dad played soccer with the boy. They all did these things until 2pm. ‘Mum! When is dinner? the girl asked. ‘Later!’’ replaid the mum. ‘I am going to my friends place’’ the boy said, ‘ Okay! have fun!’’ the mum said.

My Reading Challenge - Draw or Make somethig from your book

For my reading Challenge I choose  the book Deltora Quest - the Forest of Silence. I drew the map they used to guide themselves in the story . Here is a picture of it.

Cinquain - Zoo

                              Zoo

                            Loud,Messy 

                    Walking,Watching,Wondering

                           Seeking Animals

                                      Fun

Wierd Water Part 2

''Of Coarse'' Sue said while she held the jar of fruit bursts. Tri snatched a fruit burst and gobbled it up. ''Bad Tri! Say thank you'' said Mellisa. Ted frowned. ''Red!'' Tippi said. Sue gave the last red one to Tippi. Trip frowned. '' I want um green!'' said Trip. '''Good'' Said Ted proudly. Sue 

Passed a fruit burst to  Trip. ''Look! Look!The news! Its on!'' The dads sister said. ''The mayors 

Mayor of the year award has seen broken'' The news reporter said. ''This Was found next to clams bay cave with a mysterious foot print next to it, we now will have a break'' He said. ''Oh!' 'Annoying.' 'Grrr'

'I am so angry!' the people said.  ''We 're back with discoverer Witet Rieraw'' The news reporter said. ''Yea, This was a small foot which mostly belonged to a young girl. We are still researching this mystery and hopefully we'll find Mayer Tagg Peip'' Witet Rieraw said  proudly.

''I'm so worried'' Ted said. ''About what?'' growled Susan. ''Mayer... I mean um Sue son. I mean daughter.'' Ted said. Sue was now crying. ''Just telling my friends cousin is Witet Rieraw so maybe I could get some help Sue'' Said Mellisa. ''Thanks,Thanks,Thanks,Thanks,Thanks! You are the best!'' Sue said cheeringg.''Well where should we start?'' Mouse said. ''Ring your friend Mellisa, Micky start the car, Susana and Ted get spy gear, Susan get some snacks 

and the rest get a clear map  cause we are going to hit the road!'' Yelled Sue. ''Yep'' Ted said. ''Micky Mouse! Get the car keys ,their on the bedroom door'' Sue said. ''YOU! Ted get your car and comeback here.''she said.  ''If you have finished get you cars and come!'' She yelled. Susan looked angrily at Sue and marched away. Later that day the all set to go to 
find Sue and Mouses lost child. Susan, Mouse, Sue,Micky and Mouse's sister went in a Sue's car. 
Mellisa and her family went in Teds car . Cleaner Bob, the mums cousins best friends brothers child's teacher, Mouses boss, Susana. They all went in Susana's car. Tri,Tippi and Trip were all fast asleep.
Micky played some jazz music on the radio while Susan and Sue sang along.
  Mouse took out his banjo and also played along, his sister clapping her hands to the beat. 
'' La la la la'' sang Sue and  Susan. Ted looked out the window and played a classical music on his radio. Sue closed the window. Now Ted couldn't hear the music.  ''Sue! Look!Sue!Sue!Sue!Sue!Sue!Look!Sue! You child!
Sue!Sue! Look!Sue!Sue!Look!'' 
They all yelled. Sue saw her daughter Aqua standing on the Hill. ''AQUA!'' Sue screamed. ''Mum'' Aqua said 
carelessly. ''Stop the car! Aqua jump!'' Sue yelled. Mouse stopped the car. Sue stretched her arms and legs and climbed. 
''Mum! NO!'' 
Yelled Aqua. ''I am... What!?'' Sue said. ''Don't co....'' Aqua said but something grabbed Sue and pulled her . Sue had disappeared. ''Dad! I'll come not y-you!'' Mumbled Aqua. 
Aqua leaped to the car and sat next to her dad. ''Lets go! I 've got burgers to eat!'' Cleaner Bob said . ''Sue's gone! Sue! She is gone!'' Yelled Susana. ''I had escaped the danger my self but I don't think mum can. Its my fault. I shouldn't have left!
 Now my mums in danger!'' Sobbed Aqua.
 ''Don't worry, We WILL find her'' Said Mouse sobbing sadly. The End?

So forgetful part 2

‘ I’m sure I didn’t see that last night’  answered the mum. Never mind  I’ll clean it’ replaid  the dad.  When the girl went outside something exremaly   weird happened. ‘ Yuck ! Strawberry ice cream with chocolate swirls!’’ Screamed the girl. ‘Oh, What now? asked the dad boredly.  The family crowded up . ‘ It’s just ice cream, not a big deal’’  answered the mum . ‘’ But it’s groose!’’ the girl exclaimed truthfully. ‘’Yea’’ the boy replaid. ‘I’ll clean it’’ the dad answered.

The girl and the boy went to their room. After the ate lunch this happened. ‘’AAAAAAAAHHHH’’ screamed the boy. ‘’ What is it? the mum said. ‘’ Take a look,the entire family crowded. ‘’YUK! the family shouted. ‘We need a cleaner to clean this!’’  spoke the dad . ‘Hi, can you clean..... oh,ok ,I’ll ring you, bye’’ answered the dad on the phone. ‘They can’t come today, they’ll be coming tommorow’’ chuckled the dad. ‘Well I can’t sleep in my room’’  exclaimed boy.

‘ Could you let your  brother sleep in your room tonight? Please you don’t have to wash the dishes!  suggested the  mum. ‘Okay then, you can sleep in mine!’’ screamed the girl.

‘That night when the girl and boy were busy snozing they heard a sound. ‘ Stop that annoying noise’’ said the boy. ‘’ I’m not doing it’’ explained the girl. ‘Well you’re  the only one in the room except me’’ replaid the boy. ‘Okay,wait there is that sound. How can I make that sound when I’m talking? questioned the girl. ‘’ Hmmm,lets tell our parents’ suggested the girl . ‘’ No, we can’t do that!’’ replaid  the boy. ‘Why? wondered the girl. ‘’Because  they’ll think we can’t sleep sensibly.’’ explained the boy. ‘ Oh, okay!’’ the girl aggreed.’.  ‘ Okay, Have you got your torch? the boy asked. ‘Yep!’ replaid the girl as she dug under her bed. ‘Um, I think I accidently left it at my friends house ’ the girl spoke. ‘Ah! WHY DO... Ah,  don’t neglet the torch! So what will we do now! Since you don’t have your torch!’ the boy yelled.

‘ Sorry’’ Apoligied the girl. ‘You still have the torch that grandma gave us’ the girl realised. ‘That  had chew marks on it!’ the boy said. ‘Okay,well lets..AARGH!’ yelled the girl.

‘ Ha ha ha really funny’ the boy said. ‘No really somethings pulling me! the girl shreiked. ‘ I can’t see you!’’ the boy yelled. ‘AAAAAAARGHHH!’’ The girl shouted. The boy ran around the room but he couldn’t feel the girl. ‘No!’’ yelled the boy. The girl screamed. ‘ Help, help come here to the closet!’ the girl said sorta relivedly . The boy thought were the closet was, ‘ Is it at the left or right!’ he yelled. ‘’Right,right quick’’ the girl spoke slowly. He walked slowly to the right, could feel the closet. ‘ Come’ whispered the girl. ‘What?’’ questioned the boy. ‘Just come in’ she said. He opened the door. ‘Something pulled me then let go so I ran here. ‘I’m not sure what it was’ mumbled the girl. ‘What I saw nothing. What did it feel or sound like.’ He asked. ‘I don’t know’’ she said, ''It was something, like a um stick or um broom maybe''. ‘Lets go back to bed  I think its just a dream’ he said. ‘Okay’ She said. The walked to their beds and snoozed off.

Wierd Water

One day a girl saw a weird water, she told her parents but they never believed her. She was so angry. One day she ran away looking for the weird water and she hasn't returned. Her parents looked and looked but never found her.   When her  parents  were cleaning  her parents found a note under her  bed. This is what it said.

To parents.

Ants are biting me!

Get of I said. They never

Got of.

Please don't look for me .

Its danger!

Even though I left without telling

Please forgive me! 

            . Me

 Her parents still looked but never found her. They were sad that some days they didn't eat. They  then realised that it was their fault she went. They should have believed her. Their  parents read the note over and over and then found a pattern. ''Tagg Piep!'' they  both said. ''He's the Mayer!.'' Said the dad. They both rang some friends to help find Tagg Piep. One man called  Cleaner Bob was  lazy, he sat down watching T.V. '' Look the mayor is missing! he said. '' What?'' said Susan the mums  lost lost friend who came here from Russia. '' Mayer Tagg Piep has gone missing since the 23 of August, his children and wife are in tears. If anyone has seen this man please ring 8374952 or 111. You will will10,000 dollars and 4 double passes to Canada. Thank you'' The news reporter said. Her mum looked at the calender  My daughter was lost the same day!'' exclaimed the mum. ''Yea! Its starting  to make sense now.  Your daughter kidnap the Mayer to make a fake water thingy.'' her dad said. ''No no!'' the dad sister said angrily. '' She did say something about the water thingy ruling the world or something'' the mum said.'' Yea!'' agreed the dad. ''Food!'' said the mums cousins best friends brothers child's teacher. ''Not yet  Mr eat a lot!'' the teacher of the girl said. ''I can help with this case, since I'm a born spy'' said the dad's work boss. ''Your not!'' said Susan. '' How do you know? he asked grumpily. '' A spy wears a black ski mask'' Susan said. The mum cried thinking of their daughter. ''No!'' said the dad work boss. '' I know!'' Susan yelled. ''Stop it!'' yelled the dads sister said. ''Calm down!'' said the dad. Ding Dong. ''Look Susana is here!'' exclaimed her mum. ''Hi'' Susan said angrily. Susana was the girls         friends mum.   ''Is your daughter coming?'' the mum asked sadly. ''Yea. She's in the car'' Susana said nearly crying. ''Don't worry Sue'' Susana said to her mum. ''I wish Micky was here'' the dad said. ''So whats your name'' asked Susan. ''Um, Mouse'' said the dad blushing.''Oh'' Susan said. ''Whats your umm, Town name'' Asked Susana. '' Um, its star butterfly road.'' the dad said. '' Don't annoy him!''yelled Susan. ''Well you started it!'' Shouted Susana. ''But still'' Screamed Susan. The dad slowly vanished in the crowd. Ding dong! It was Micky!  ''Micky!'' ''Mouse!'' ''Yay! they said. Micky was an builder who builded their house. ''Micky mouse'' Sang the dad sister. ''You all care about  your things and just for 1 minute have you thought about my daughter?  You selfish people. You

should be ashamed.'' Said the mum angrily.

''Sorry Sue'' said Susan. ''I'm very sorry Sue!'' exclaimed Susana winking at Susan.

''At least someone cares'' sobbed her mum ( Sue). 

''Don't worry. We're all here for you'' Susana said grinning. ''Yea!'' Said the Mouse. ''Don't worry from now on we are all trying hard to find your daughter! No matter what we will find her!'' The dads sister said. ''Ding Dong''. ''Oh! I guess  Mellisa, Ted, Tri, Trip and Tippi are here!'' said Sue proudly. ''Hello, How are you'' Ted asked Sue.  ''Sometimes good and other times not so great''' Sue said honestly. ''Mummy! Little bear!'' Tri said. ''Pony!'' yelled Tippi. ''Mummy!'' said Trip calmly. ''Want a chocolate?'' Sue said to the triplets. ''Go Ga go!'' Trip said. 'Speak english'' Moaned Mellisa. ''Yes!'' Trippy said happily. ''I chocolate want!'' Tri said. Trippi whacked Tri and marched away.

To be contined