Shape Poem - Cats

                                                                                 Big                                              Paw

                                                                      Cute                                            Purr

                                                                               Chubby                                     Fluffy cat

                            Small eyes                                 Green eyes

                                                                 Long whiskers                             Rough Tongue

                                                                         Angry, aggresive, A+ Power, Never give up!                                     

                                        Range of colours, meowing if they are happy

                                                                Sharp, Scratchy ears rubbing to the fence

                                                       Sleeping all day , licking their clean fur

                                                        Playing in  small cardboard box. Toys!

                              They always land on 2 feet, never

                                                                                 break a leg, small or big cats!

                                                                                  Black or white, still great pets

                                                                                  White, grey, white, even blue!                                                                                          

                                                                                               Fluffy or smooth

                                                                                                     Cats!

Learning how to add specific detail

Here is our first story:

Then we had a workshop with Miss S. and practiced adding in specific detail and adjectives to make our story much more interesting for our audience.

carried away

Woosh! Boom! goes the door. "BUBBLES I WONT TO BLOW BUBBLES "HUW HUW HUW" Look at the size of that bubble. What should I do with it? I sould jump into it 3, 2, 1, jump. "The bubble went up UP UP! And then his mum turns up, her face turns as blue as the sky when she sees her son drifting up UP UP! A strong wind blows and pushes him as fast as a air plane." where am I going" He is shooting through the sky towards the airport and A PLANE IS ABOUT TO TAKE OFF!!!"I 'm so scared!""HELP HLEP" The airplane hits the bubble and it takes him up to space.He lives cause he is in a air bubble He moves towards a different planet he lands on it with a bounce. There are aliens on the planet and they can speck english. The aliens are friendly. The aliens live in bubbles too so he fits in well. thy make him king booble google bubble glup and then they named the planet after him. they make there bubbles out of stuff called gooble rooble and then they mix his bubble with there bubble mix to make his bubble indestructable. He is feeling homesike so he wants to go home. He asks the aliens "how can i get home?" They take him to a slingshot that is aiming at his home plant. The aliens slingshot him safely home. At home he makes a slingshot that is aiming at his kingdom.

Rock up.

Rock up!
Outstanding day
Climbing up the rock walls
Keep on going

Using the Bow and arrow
Prize for the team with the most points