Tuesday 2 July 2013

Warriors




Leafclan




"Jaykit? Where are you Jaykit? Bluefur wants you!" called a brown tabby tom kit.  Ha! thought Jaykit, you can't trick me with that again.  "Blazekit do you know where Jaykit is?"  Jaykit herd Bulefurs voice call.  " Nooooooooo!" mewled Blazekit so lowed that Jaykit almost jumped out of his fur.  Blazekit suddenly fell silent.  The whole clan was looking at him.  "What in starclans name is going on!?!" yelled a grey tom.  "Father... " bluefur started "Don' call me father bluefur!"
"Yes humstar."meowed bluefur.
"What was the yell about?"
"oh" whispered bluefur then more lowedly said "Blazekit was up...."
"Blazekit!!!!  What do you think your doing?!"
"Hu?  What was that?" asked blazekit startled
"What do you think yo..."  started bushtwig
"What do you think your doing?!" interrupted humstar.
"Hey" called out hollykit "Whats going on?"
"Nothing thank you very much!" replied Bushkit
"Bushkit" growled barkfur "You Know not to speak to your sister like that!
"Yeah whatever.  I don't care."
At that moment Jaykit jumped out of his hiding place and scared everyone out of their fur.
"JAYKIT! why did you do that?  You bad kit" growled bluefur.
At that moment Blazekit meowed "Hey Jaykit want to play mossball?"
"Yeah sure." Replied Jaykit happy that Blazekit was getting him out of trouble.
As Jaykit and Blazekit walked around camp Jaykit wondered when Blazekit was going to say that he owed Blazekit somthing in return.  Just then Blazekit brought up the subject and said: "You know you owe me somthing"
"Yes I do"Hissed Jaykit not feeling like talking about it."And it is?"
"You choose." Started blazekit "And choose quickly cause I don't wanna get inno troble so hurry up" 
"Ok"replyed Jaykit anoyed "I'll give you tomorows lunch k?"
"O-K" said blazekit happythat he would get an xtra piece of lunch.
"But I still get something to eat;" continued Jaykit "I'll take the littlest piece to eat ok or no?"
"nn ok"
Feeling depressed Jaykit went into the nusry and spotted fallowfern with troblekit sunkit and snowkit
"Hey look its da aweshome kit Daykit!" yelled troblekit.
"YAY" yelled snowkit and sunkit in exsiment. 
"lol at least I have some admires" said Jaykit "unlike my bro..."
"Unlike WHO?" yelled Troblekit in Jaykits ear "we'll shread them till they wish they were NEVER alive"
I don't think you wanna do that. thought Jaykit.


T
o be continued...

1 comment:

  1. Congratulations on your first post Maddie, it's great to see your free writing. Keep up the good work.

    Chris

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