Snow White And The 5 Deers

One  cold evening in DontGoBack Drive a little girl was born. ‘What should we name her?’’ the girls father asked. ‘’Hmm, Her face is white as snow’’ Said her mum admiring her daughter. ‘Let’s name her White Snow’’ The dad said. ‘’Yes! That's a fantastic name’’ The girls mother said. ‘Or even Snow White!’’ she said. ‘’White Snow or Snow White?’’ he asked. ‘there is one person I think we will need to ask, Tivi the witch of Revenge’’ The mum said. ‘’But isn’t she a witch. Evil’’ The dad said. ‘No, Yes but still she helped me get my job, and let me study, Without her I wouldn’t know where I’d be, In the rubbish Bins, She got me and raised me to become who I am now’ The mum said. ‘Wait, But wouldn’t she forget you? Its been about 20 years since she left you to figure your life’’ the dad said. ‘It has been a while, but she will, I was like a daughter to her and I must tell her the news, she will be proud.’’ the mother said. ‘Um, okay, but If it doesn't go as planned do not blame me cause I am just telling’’ the dad confirmed. They both walked towards the Witches tower clinging their daughter to their shoulder. ‘’Um, guess we are here’’ The dad said. ‘’Um, I will knock’’ the mum said. ‘knock knock knock’ ‘’Who is it’’ a low voice said. ‘’Um, Anne, Madam’’ The mum said. ‘’Who dares enters my house! I will cast a spell on yours tiny... thingy that's, um on your arm and on that's 16th birthday it will be pricked by a needle and will sleep forever!’’ The witch said. ‘’No, No, Majesty Tivi, You remember me? Anne, you got me when my mother vanished’’ The mum said. ‘’You will now leave! Leave forever!’’ yelled the Witch. ‘’Hmm, Guess who’s right again’’ the dad said. ‘Oh! I can not let this happen!’’ The mum yelled. ‘’If Tivi plans something, she will never give up! We must not let our daughter ever feel pain! We must send her to the woods and the deer's, Rabbits and birds will help her! Lets send her’’ The mum said. ‘Fine with me’’ the dad said. ‘’Okay’’ The lady said and threw her daughter into the woods and left.


 The baby cried willing her mum and dad will come but they never came. That night the baby was very sleepy and slept dreaming of her parents. ‘‘Look! Whats that? Is it a human?’’ The father deer said. ‘’Yes, I think it is, it has no parents’’ The mother deer said. The baby cried and cried. The birds woke up. ‘’Oh no! Lets help that child!’’ the parrot said. ‘’Yes’’ The green budgie said. They deer's rushed to help the baby so did the birds. The 2 deer's pushed the baby on the other deer's back and the birds and rabbits made a den for the kid to sleep in. ‘We will take care of this’’ The deer said. ‘’Okay, thanks’’ The rabbits said. ‘’Okay. we Will visit’’ the birds said. ‘’Look, The kid looks so white and doesn't even have a hint of tan,’’ The father deer said. ‘’Yes, Its so rotten! Looks like garbage! Nothing like our children’’ the mother deer said, ‘Lets call her Garbage White ’’ the father deer said. The mum agreed. ‘What's that?’’ Asked Wonderful the oldest child. ‘’Yea?’’ said Beauty the 2nd oldest. ‘Is that our new flat mate?’ Asked Gorgeous the Youngest child. ‘Yep its your new flat mate’’ the male deer laughed.


 The 5 deer's took great care of Garbage White and treated her like their own child. When she was13, she started helping in the forest. Her roll was to clean the forest. Even though nobody wanted to do it before, but when she did the jobs she sang and dance, soon most people happily volunteered to help. She was now 15, Her birthday was coming in 3 days. She was very happy with her life their and there was no worry for her.


 Snow White’s parents lived in misery ever since they lost their child. Her dad lost his job. Her mum became lazy. All they did was ask each other ‘’How do you think Snow White is doing?’’ They’d ask. ‘’Fine’’ The other will say. All they wanted was a good future for thee child. One day a letter came. Snow White’s dad opened it. This was the first ever letter they got in 7 years.

 20/8/13 22
 RedRicKRock
 Fine Valley road

 To Anne and Jarred

 We, The Red Fox club thank you for your support in donating in the annual RedFox day competition and would like to congratulate you for getting 3rd place in The RedFox Running comp. Here you will be given a chance of a lifetime. 1 Million dollars will be at your doorstep at 23/8/13. We thank you for your help and hop to see you soon. 

 Sincerely. 

 RedRickRonny 


 ‘’Oh! Did you see that! We got 1 million bucks!’’ Snow white;s Dad Yelled. ‘’Wooo!’’ Anna yelled. They soon moved out of there flat to a 6 bedroom house with a massive pool. They were soon living in paradise! Anna and Jarred cared less and less about Snow White and on day, they didn’t even know who she was.

 As for Snow White she lived in joy with her family, Peace the female deer, Faith the Male deer and their 3 children Wonderful, Georges and Beauty. Snow white became family to the deer's. One day when snow white just woke up she saw a light. She felt so magical. She heard the sound of a horse trotter. Vines were getting cut, Who was there to see her? Snow white looked high and low. Soon a clearing came out. It was a human. Snow White had hardly remember the first time she saw a human. The human walked towards her and said, ‘’Who are you? ‘’ The human asked. ‘’Um, Glowing Garbage’’ Snow white said a she blushed. The human just laughed. He looked like he was the same age as her. ‘’Well I am Shay’’ He said. ‘’Um, So you like here, right?’’ he asked. ‘’Yes I do’’ She said. Finally some one knew that. ‘’Well, such a bad name for a very pretty girl’’ he said. ‘’Um, The dears chose it’’ she said. ‘’Dears? You know the deers’’ he exclaimed. ‘’Well not precisely, but yea, it um like. Magic’’ she said. ‘’Well where are the deer's? It’s been a log time since I have met them’’ he asked. ‘’I will go get them’’ Snow White said and ran to the Deer's. She told everything that happened. The deer's walked out side. ‘’Oh! You’re back!Its been a long time. Whats the name?’’ the female deer asked. ‘’I am Shay RedRick ’’ he laughed . ‘’Hmmm, Names these days are very unusual’’ the Female deer said. ‘’Dad? Whats going on?’’ Wonderful asked trotting along her siblings. ‘’Nothing much, You remember him, Right? He came when you were a little baby’’ the Dad deer said. Wonderful and her sibling smiled. ‘’Um, I wanted to ask, um, why does a human girl live with you?’’ He asked. ‘’When her parents dumped her here. We couldn’t leave her all alone, it was getting dark, Plus she grew up to be a very great child’’ The mum deer said. ‘’Don’t you wish she could explore the town? Make new friends, get a job, I can show her around and I will give her back to you’’ he said ‘’Well we have known you and your father for a long time, Garbage? Would you like to go, Explore your true home? The deer's asked. ‘’Well, you know them, I’ll just go’’ Glowing garbage said. ‘’Okay, up to you’’ The deer's said. The three baby deer's said bye, they all hugged and left snow white to go to Shay. Snow White has never seen any humans and was a bit nervous seeing one. ‘’Um, Where do you want to go?’’ he asked, ‘’Um, I, Um, the place where humans live’’’ she said. ‘’Um, Humans live around all places all around the country’’ He said. ‘’Um, a human you know’’ She said. ‘’Um, I live with my dad, RedRickRonny, That's his stage name, I call him dad or RedRick or RedRonney or RickRonney or..’’ he said while Snow white was laughing really hard. ‘’So take me there’’ she said. ‘’Kay’’ he said and they both trotted of.

 For her parents they were chatting to RedRickRonny about the new comp. ‘’Hi dad’’ Shay said with Snow White. ‘’Oh! Who is this?’’ RedRickRonny asked. ‘’Um, Remember those deer's you helped? Those deer's took care of her and told me to take her out here for a while’’ he said. ‘’Wow! She is so beautiful! Skin as white as snow! Big blue eyes, Just like our snow white’’ Snow white’s mother said then started sob. ‘’Oh, Are you alright? ‘’ Snow White asked her mother. ‘’yes! Now I know! She was from the forest right? And how old are you? ‘’ she asked. ‘’Um, 17’’ Snow white said. ‘’According to my calculations our daughter must be 17 too! ‘’’ The dad yelled. ‘’You are our daughter!’’ the said hugging her. ‘’Woop! ‘’ Shay grumbled. ‘’So, Y-YOU ARE MY P-P-PARENTS! ‘’ Snow white yelled. ‘’Yes! !Yes! yes!’’ They all yelled and hugged each other tightly. ‘’Oh! Snow white! Tivi’s spell didn’t work! Snow White PLEASE STAY HERE WITH US! We beg you our long lost child!’’’ The dad said. ‘’But I must go tell the deer's and Wonderful, Beauty and Gorgues’’ Snow white said. ‘’Go Snow white and show us these amazing deer's who took care of you!’’ The Mum exclaimed. ‘’Who’s snow white? ‘’ Snow white asked. ‘’you! You! What did they call you there!’’ exclaimed the mum. ‘’Glowing Garbage, the kids called me Glee Glee sometimes’’ Snow White said blushing. ‘’Oh! What a dreadful name! But we must go to thank these deer's get the presents’’ The Dad said. ‘’kay, I will take you guys their and soon maybe snow white can come with me to town, go shopping maybe’’ he whispered and got his horse and went. When they reached the forest snow white showed her parents her home and introduced them to the deer's and their children. ‘’Please take whatever you need you have given us more than what we wished for’’ the Mum said. ‘’NO,NO! You have already gave us your child to stay with us for years and years and that's the best gift of all but one thing you could do is let her visited every week?’’ the Dee rs asked. ‘’Yes! Yes! More like daily!’’ the mum said and thanked them and they went to their home. ‘’Lets go to the mall’’ shay said and they went. Soon they lived happily ever after.


The End. Told by Wonderful the deer, retold by P.L

Foods I don't like:

Foods I Dont Like: - brussel sprouts - chillie - Peppper - Pepperoni - eskimo lollies - bananas - cheesecake - dumpling - lemon - lime - watermelon - radish - Spinach - snails - Durian - crab - Wasabi - Mints

My Teacher Machine

I couldn’t believe I had a chance to make my perfect teacher! I looked towards to the magical teacher machine thinking of what i’d say. I started saying what wanted my ultimate teacher to be like. 


 ‘I would like my teacher to be an average height, not to short and not to tall. I want her to have long black smooth hair with a shade of brown and have emerald green eyes. She will be wearing a black shirt of glowing cat eyes and a grey leopard printed pants. She will be wearing long golden earrings in the shape of a three and wore lots of gold bangles on her hands. She will have black shoes with bright white laces and in her hands she will have a brown short-haired cat with glowing blue eyes with a black collar which said ... in gold and a green stone which looks like a real emerald. She will be patting her cat when I walk in and ask if I’d like to pat the cat.

 My Perfect teacher will have to be very kind, caring and thoughtful. I would like my teacher to be kind, for example, If I Don’t understand a writing strategy I would like her not to get angry and teach me again and go through the steps carefully and make sure I understand. My teacher machine will be a fun and happy teacher. 


 I would want her to have fun when she teaches and not get bored. I would want her to be funny and tell jokes and teach me lots of fun and y easy ways for me to learn. I would like her to teach me new ways of studying like instead of researching about a dog, bring a real dog for the day. I would like the teacher machine to do lots of fun things like art and music. I don’t want her to be too funny and happy and not worry about problems but to relax and be a great teacher to the students.


 Another quality I would want my teacher to have is to be very Encouraging and supportive. For example, If They put me for a level group and Its too hard I would want them to tell me that I can do it and support me if I make a mistake. And if I wrote some writing I would like them to give me lots of feedback of things I did well and things I need to improve on and support me with it. I want her to encourage me in a good way and not force me to do something I would not want to do. I want her to tell me ways that I can be more better at things like getting a faster time for basic facts or ways I could use wicked words.’

  'My teacher machine will be understanding and trustful. I would want her to understand me and be someone I can trust when I need to tell something. For example if I see somebody Stealing something I would want the the teacher to understand me and trust that I am telling the truth. I want my Teacher machine to be thoughtful and think about if something is easy or hard and help me if its too hard for me.'

'I would also want her to be caring and care for me and not ignore me. I would want a kind, caring and helpful teacher. I would like her to love wild animals. I would want her job to be a wild animal researcher and a teacher and go on lots of journeys with animals and tell the class about her latest discoveries and share her understanding about animals to me.' 

I would want her to teach lots of things about animals and never do anything bad to animals. I want her to have 2 cats and to dogs. Now I have told what I want my perfect teacher to be like, Trusting, Fun, Creative, Challenging, Interesting and thoughtful. I wonder how the year will be? 

Yellowfang's secret

Jayden And Isaac Drive Time (Bear Grylls)

World History

Today we're going to learn about:

The Mughal Empire
The Slave Trade
            

The Mughal Empire
This Empire ruled India for nearly 200 years. It started in 1526 by a King named "Babur". Later on he left it in the Hands of his Grandson "Akbar" He was only 13 years old! Akbar ruled only until 1605. After he gave the Kingdom to his Son "Jahangir". When he was old enough to give the Kingdom to someone else in his family, He gave it to " Shah Jahan". Shah Jahan loved art and its work.  He also built the " Taj Mahal" in his wife's memory.

The Slave Trade

There is a lot of History of Slavery in Africa. in the 1500s, Most Slaves were prisoners of war. Some were sold to Arab traders. People used to trap them and make them work day and night. They also used to wear heavy stone spikes on their necks.

I am going to talk to you about something you do not know about me.

Hi it’s Holly here,  today I am going to talk to you about something you do not know  about me.

It started on my first week of school at Summerland we were doing work inside class when one of my friends asked to go to the toilet and I had to go to so I asked to go to the toilet too the teacher said yes so me and my friend went into the toilets then my other friends started to come in to the toilet too. I asked them what   are you doing here they said that they needed to  go to the toilet too. So I said ok, just as I was walking into the door to the toilet my friend said right your name on this paper. What I didnt rearlize was that the pen was a vivid. I was leaning on the wall after I had wrote my name I gave the paper back to the girl and she said look Holly wrote her name on the wall. I got in trouble and had to sit outside the office, I didnt not get in troublel by mum because she knew that it was just my first week of school. And I was only 5 years old.

Bubbles

Bubbles

SLAM! the door went as I rushed outside to find the most amazing sight. The birds singing, the flowers blooming. I blew my bubbles, emptying the container as I blew the biggest bubble ever... It was HUGE! It was the size of me. What would you do if you saw a bubble as big as you? I don't know about you ... but I would jump in!

So I did! It was really fun.  At last the bubble rose off the ground taking me with it! I was terrified, I just thought maybe I shouldn't of hopped into the bubble in the first place. "Ohh" I sighed I will never ever see my family again. By then I looked all around, it was calm and misty and it all seemed mysterious then POP! AAAGH! I was already falling through the clouds smack! smack! smack! I was continuing to smack my face across the leaves as if it was slowing me down then thump! on to the cold hard ground.

It was lonely? I heard a really strange sound, it sounded like this "hub glub lub lub." I took a closer look it was a tribe of short elves. It sounded like they were saying "hup two three four" or something. I took a step back so they wouldn't see me but it was too late they saw me they ran over and started pointing at me and saying some weird words like "oga oga boo boo!" They bumped me up on a chair that looked really fancy. It's almost like they were making me their king or something? But I had to face the facts I was alone and cold.

So I had to let them take me. It took really long to get to get there but there it was the biggest palace I've ever seen! It was made out of gold and silver! The bathroom, the kitchen and even the throne... the throne was gold carved with silver. The front door had a sigh saying THE BSG PALACE it meant the bronze silver gold palace. The cups you drank out of were bronze, the the table was bronze... You name it.. everything was either bronze, silver or gold.

Finally once having a tour around the palace, they dropped me off in the throne room then sat me down in the golden throne. They took a step back and looked at me strangely then one of them took a step forward and placed a bronze, silver and gold crown on my head. Then there was a silence it was a very long silence then they started to cheer and celebrate and from then on I knew I was the king of the bronze silver gold palace.

Finding Nemo

“Wow!” exclaimed Dory. “Are we going in there?” “Yup” said Marlin. “Just swim straight” So off they went through the humongous Sea Cloud. “Should we play a game?” Dory asked. “Uuuuummmmm Ok” Marlin answered. “Well done!” replied Dory. “I’m thinking of something small and it’s orange and it has stripes...” Dory exclaimed. “It’s me” Marlin exclaimed, and for the next one just a guess, it’s me.” Then all of a sudden Marlin stopped and said “I’ve seen this floating spec before, so that means we haven’t been swimming straight, we’ve been swimming around in circles! Aaaaaarrrrr!” Marlin screamed. “I need some fresh air, i’m going up for some fresh air!” he said. Then Dory quickly grabbed Marlin and said “hey breath, just breath and calm down. It will be completely fine we’ll just find somebody around here to help us.” “Oh brilliant idea who are we going to ask the spec.”  

“Uumm, hey you over there, this guys son Bingo, I mean Nemo has got taken away to Sydney. So could you please help us out with directions? Awwww come on little fella.” “Uumm Dory I don’t think he’s a little fella, I’m a little fella.” Marlin whispered. “Oh big fella, ok Whale.” said Dory. Then Dory started speaking Whale. It seemed like the Whale didn’t like Dory speaking Whale, so it swam off somewhere else. “Why don’t you look at that” said Marlin “It must be hungry so it’s swam off to find some food. And if you don’t mind me saying that it might come back and eat ME or eat US!” “Don’t worry silly, whales only eat Krill not Clown Fish” Dory sighed. Then all of a sudden Krill swam past, yelling “SWIM AWAY!, SWIM AWAY!”

Dory and Marlin didn’t know what the Krill were talking about. Marlin turned around “Aaargh, swim for your lives!” he screamed. “Marlin what are you talking about?” said Dory. Dory turned around. “Aargh, why didn’t you tell me earlier!” yelled Dory. “Eeeeeewwwww, this is a disgusting place” said Marlin. “Now I know what the Krill were talking about” “You do realize that there is a big hole at the top of the whale” said Dory. “But how are we going to get up there and get out” replied Marlin. “Wait a minute, I think I have an idea. Maybe we could wait for the whale to open it’s mouth and then swim out” said Marlin. “No thats a very bad idea...” replied Dory. “Just wait” said Marlin “I haven’t finished yet. The other option was that we could always wait for the whale to blow water out of it’s blowhole and then we would be out of this disgusting whale.” “Which option do you like the best Dory, the first one or the second one.” asked Marlin. “Well for your information  don’t like any of them” said Dory. “Well that wasn’t a choice” Marlin explained. “Well to me it was a choice” Dory angrily said. “We just need to find a way out, because i still have to find my son and this right now is not working so I presume that we should start figuring out a way on how to get out of this disgusting place!” shouted Marlin. “It’s all your fault why we’re in here, so get thinking now!” So Dory said to Marlin “fine then I will get a torch out.”

Dory pulled out a torch from the inside of her fin but it wasn’t there, so then she said “Ooops, it must be on the other fin.” So she looked inside her other fin. “Yep, here it is” she said. She turned it on and then all of a sudden “aaargh, what is that ugly thing hanging down from above your head!” Dory yelled. “What?!” replied Marlin. “Oh that it’s just the tonsils from the whale. You do realize you know that we are in the throat” he said. “Well no actually because I’m not a whale expert. I’m only an expert on talking” Dory explained. “Yeah, I think I could’ve guessed that myself” Marlin whispered in a cheeky voice. “Oh, I’ve got an idea we could wait for the whale to open it’s mouth and then we can swim out and then be on our journey again!” said Dory. “Oh what a great idea, I wouldn’t of thought about anything more better than that but there’s only one thing.” “Ok, what’s that?” “I mean that you have listening problems and that you don’t listen because that’s the exact same option I said to you before...But NO you didn’t decide to listen to what I said!” Marlin shouted in Dory’s face. “Well, I’m really sorry Marlin but if you had of been taking more care for Bingo then we wouldn’t have been in this ugly whale!” “Don’t talk about my son NEMO like that and we’ve been in this whale for a day now and you still don’t know my sons name he’s called NEMO not BINGO!” The fighting carried on and on and on. But then finally it was all peaceful and quiet for a little while but then they became friends again. “Wait a minute I think I hear a noise and it’s the mouth opening. Maybe it just wanted us to stop fighting.” Marlin said. “YEAH, WE HAVE SAVED THE DAY!” They shouted together. Let’s be on our journey again. “Just keep swimming! Just keep swimming!” “Dory!” “What?” “You know what!” “Naahh, I was just joking I just wanted you to get mad. Then Krill swim past “SWIM AWAY, SWIM AWAY!”  “Hey look Krill!” said Dory. “Oh No, the journey starts here again!” Marlin yelled ...

The End!

Emilys diary ALL ABOUT ME

Emilys diary ALL ABOUT ME

Today I am going to talk to you about me me me me just me what I do what I like every thing. I am going to frist talk to you about the sports that I do at school and at home.

The sport that I mostly play is netball it is relly fun because all of my friends are in the team.  Even Isabella we get a lot of lollys after our game cool right we always need some sager after a big game of running around. I play c my coach say that I am good at it because I am tiny for my age so she say that I am fast too so when you put them togther tiny and fast ids one of the best players in the team. Mum and dad aways came my game because they get free coffees from  Isabellas mum Bethany she is relly nice my mum really likes her. Any way netball is really fun we play the games on saturday and we traning on wednesday.

Did you know that I am really good at maths and reading and art but not at sprinting that is the worst thing that I am good at. With math I am the best in the class with reading I love doing that every day. With art I would do that any time of the day I am really good at it my art teacher say that I am the best in the class. The thing I like doing in art is drawing things it is really fun. I thing that I am the smartis in the school my teacher Miss Pee told that I could go to intermetoit and I would be fine.

Peopel say that I am very nice and the I am helpful but I am not a jalose person so that is good my friend says that I am a peace maker and that I do not like arumeant anlest it had somthing to do with my brothers well that is troow.

can I tall you a joke befor I go why did the  moon like the sun because she was so hot hahaha well that is it for today see next time.

Today I am going to talk to you about me me me me just me what I do what I like every thing. I am going to frist talk to you about the sports that I do at school and at home.

The sport that I mostly play is netball it is relly fun because all of my friends are in the team.  Even Isabella we get a lot of lollys after our game cool right we always need some sager after a big game of running around. I play c my coach say that I am good at it because I am tiny for my age so she say that I am fast too so when you put them togther tiny and fast ids one of the best players in the team. Mum and dad aways came my game because they get free coffees from  Isabellas mum Bethany she is relly nice my mum really likes her. Any way netball is really fun we play the games on saturday and we traning on wednesday.

Did you know that I am really good at maths and reading and art but not at sprinting that is the worst thing that I am good at. With math I am the best in the class with reading I love doing that every day. With art I would do that any time of the day I am really good at it my art teacher say that I am the best in the class. The thing I like doing in art is drawing things it is really fun. I thing that I am the smartis in the school my teacher Miss Pee told that I could go to intermetoit and I would be fine.

Peopel say that I am very nice and the I am helpful but I am not a jalose person so that is good my friend says that I am a peace maker and that I do not like arumeant anlest it had somthing to do with my brothers well that is troow.

can I tall you a joke befor I go why did the  moon like the sun because she was so hot hahaha well that is it for today see next time.

EMILY’S DIARY’S MY FAMILY

EMILY’S DIARY’S MY FAMILY

This is me Emily Fall the best kid in the family, well thats what I think. I have two brothers, did you hear that? I have two brothers. To be honest it is the worst thing in my life. Having two brothers is really hard to deal with especially when they blame things on you.

Like, would you put a cookie in the DVD player and shut it?  No... that was my little brother Tommy. He is cute on the outside but evil on the inside, he is 2 years old but don’t be fooled by him. Once when a lady was playing with Tommy, Tommy got angry and he poked the ladies eyes.  The lady was ok with that, but she fell and hit her head and you do not want to know what happened next.

Then we have my older brother who is now 13, his name is Zac.  All he does to me is pushes me and he does not let me talk to him. My mum says that is just what teenagers are like and just to leave him. I think that he just needs a kick up the backside to treat his siblings like his friends. But I would get told off if I did anything like that.

Then there is mum she is the best mum in the world, the only thing wrong about her is she believes in Tommy and what he says so I always get in trouble.  Mum should listen to the more mature kids like me. My mum works as a teacher at siveer primry school that is the school that I go too.  Then there is my dad he is the nicest in my family, the only thing I do not like about him is that he is a bit secure with safety he does not let me have freedom.  And my dad works at a designing company, cool right? Well, I think it is.

Oh can I tell you a joke?  Knock! Knock! Who’s there? Pie! Pie who? Pie you are... no no no, that is not a joke here’s one. I think you like owls? Knock! Knock! Who’s there? Who! Who, who? I told you, you like owls. Ha ha ha funny right? At school my teacher is name is Mrs Pee and when someone asks to go to the toilet the whole class starts to laugh and laugh and then when our teacher asks us why we are laughing.  We have to make up an excuse.

Did you know that I made up a word its compotous and compangewlist.  Compotous means when you are excited and sad at the same time and compangewlist means that you are fabulous!  I use those words all the time. My best friends name is Isabella and she is really nice to me. She is so rich because her dad is an inventor and he get 1000000000 (there’s too many 0’s for me to say!) per invention he does. So when I normally go to Isabella home I get $50 but I  normally spend it in a week so I try and go there everyday if I can.

Well that is all I am going to talk to you about today, see you next time!

Sally The Sea Monster Three The Last Of It Part 1

“Two coral pasta chef Mike” asked Sally, it was a normal day in Sea city and Sally loved her job and her restaurant was becoming the top five she was aiming for first place all she had to do is beat Mac’s burgers, Jennifer who was Sally’s best friend came rushing through “ Sally I got some bad news, Mackenzie Coral is coming and shes coming to try your food, you need to make your famous sweet Jumbo because she wants to see if you can beat hers you better hurry, I’ll do the other work just make your Jumbo”, Sally ran to the kitchen and got her ingredients and making her Jumbo would take five minutes so she started making some coral dip “ Jennifer can you make a table for Mackenzie and also can you collect the coral dip and put it on her table please “ asked Sally, Jennifer found a table and she put the coral dip on the table and put a special reserve sign on the table, ‘WHISH!’ the door opened and Mackenzie came through, everyone in the room was amazed to see the famous chef in a resturant. “ Welcome Mackenzie Coral, please do sit down “ asked Jennifer politely. In the kitchen Sally was on fire, her Jumbo was ready in five seconds, her mum says she got talent and she should join the Master Chef. In the resturant inside Mackenzie was about to get bored so Jennifer had an idea she whispered to some of the staff and then music started it was the staff dancing and making it entertaining, in the kitchen Sally could hear music and thought of Jennifer she always have an idea, Sally was getting the dish ready and swam to the table carefully and fast when she was about to stop she skidded and nearly fell but she swung around the table and placed the plate on the table safely, Sally took a big breath and slowly went into the kitchen and fell on the chair. After a meal that Mackenzie ate she stood up and left the resturant, Sally felt a bit worried she had so many questions in  her mind. Next morning Jennifer came running up to Sally and she was holding the newspaper “ Sally I got news, Mackenzie wrote an article about your Jumbo ” explained Jennifer, Sally felt very nervous. To Be Continued

Lightning - Strikes Back - Series 1

Boom... Slam... Crash! Lightning was striking everywhere. Mouse our cat and cat our mouse were really really scared. Surprisingly both of them don’t hate each other. Mouse (The cat) was on my lap and cat (The mouse) was on mouse, snuggling into his soft silky ginger fur. Everybody in the house was asleep apart from me (Well mouse and cat to). I was pretty sure that mum and dad were asleep, because if one of them couldn’t get to sleep they would come out and watch the tele. My tummy started rumbling, so I went into the fridge, opened the door and their it was. My big, massive, giant, jumbo birthday cake. I forget to tell you that it was going my birthday tomorrow. I was turning 9 and I was meant to be going to a place called, Tree Adventures but it don’t think I will be because of this horrible weather. Boom... Smash... Slam! The lightning was still going off like crazy, I heard another big boom. It must off struck the big acorn tree outside. I went to my room and put my big puffer jacket on, and ran outside. Lightning was striking everywhere, it was going in all sorts of different directions and struck in the places that you would of least expected. Mouse’s cat bowl was outside and it was silver, so it was attracting the lightning. I picked it up and started running for the door. It was an big mistake. I got struck. There was nothing I could do. I couldn’t move, I couldn’t yell. The cat bowl was still on me so I knew I was going to get struck again.

To Be Continued...

Series Coming:

Lightning - Strikes Back - 1

Lightning - Pay Back - 2

Lightning - Stormy Night - 3

Lightning - Thunder Storm - 4

Lightning - Flash Out - 5

Monster School: Minecraft part one meet the students

Herobrine is the teacher of monster school and the student are.... Ghast,  Inderman,  Zombie, Zombie pig man, creeper, spider and skeleton. They have to go through tough challenges. If the students die Herbrine will take them out and they will be eliminated out of the challenge. In each challenge was a test so they can see whose the best or work as a team in  the challenge. After the challenge they could fail or not fail. 

To Be Continue....

Sam's And Nick's Amazing Adventure

Sam was a boy who was thirteen and lived a normal life. One day, Sam was playing with his friend Nick on Minecraft, when suddenly, a tsunami appeared and washed away the part of the city where his dad worked. Sam only heard the devastating news when he reached his home. His mum was crying when she heard the news. Sam’s dad was dead.

A fortnight later, Sam was in his room when a earthquake started. He got under his bed to protect himself. When the earthquake stopped, he got out from under his bed and went to look for his mum. His house was still sturdy. But he was still very cautious. When he went into the kitchen he found his mum lying on the floor, dead, with a concrete block on her. He cried for half an hour.

After he stopped crying, he dragged his mum into his bedroom. Then he went looking for Nick to tell him the bad news. Through the next hour, Sam searched for Nick. Finally Sam found Nick. Sam told Nick that his parents are dead. Nick told Sam that his parents were in another country. Nick told Sam that his dad was a wizard and knew a potion that can bring people back to life. Nick knew the potion ingredients by heart. He told Sam where to find the ingredients. The ingredients were blood, water and bones. The ingredient places were Mountain Of Doom, River Of Death and Forest Of No Man.

Sam went off with Nick to find the first ingredient at the Mountain of Doom. They arrived at a place where there were lots of mountains, so they had to figure out which was the Mountain Of Doom. It was easy to spot, because of the lightning and black snow at the top. As they went slowly up the mountain, they saw a group of zombies. They found two large sticks, got them and used them to fight off the zombies. After that, they ran to the top of the mountain. There, they found a cave that contained one of the potion ingredients, blood. They grabbed it and went out of the cave.  They saw two parachutes, put them on and jumped off the Mountain Of Doom. When they reached the ground, they took off their parachutes and went off to the River Of Death.

Upon arriving at the River Of Death, they went towards the river and saw that it was filled entirely with blood and skeletons. They went searching for the second ingredient. Suddenly the skeletons started climbing out of the river and swords appeared in their bony hands. Sam and Nick had nothing to fight with except for their bare hands. Good thing they were black belts in Karate. In a flurry of fists and feet, they destroyed the skeleton army. But then, the bones of the skeletons came back together! Sam just randomly rummaged around in his pockets (he does that when he’s scared) and found glue! They knocked down the skeletons bones again, but this time putting glue on the bones. The bones stayed on the ground! Sam and Nick high-fived and went of to find the second ingredient to the potion. About twenty minutes later they found a very tall tree with a bottle of water at the top of it. Nick climbed the tree extremly fast and climbed down with the bottle of water. After Nick had kept the bottle of water in his pocket and went off with Sam to the Forest Of No Man.

When they reached the Forest Of No Man they stopped to rest. After their rest they went into the forest and started looking for the final ingredient. They had been walking for thirty minutes when they saw a mutant zombie! They did not have anything to defeat the mutant zombie so they just simply ran for their lives. Sam and Nick ran until they got to a clearing filled with bamboo sticks. They stopped a to look around. The mutant zombie was no where to be seen. Sam and Nick looked around for the last potion ingredient. Suddenly the mutant zombie burst out of the bushes. Sam and Nick looked around for a weapon, but all there was bamboo sticks. Suddenly Sam and Nick noticed that they could use the bamboo sticks for defence! They both picked up one bamboo stick each and fought off the mutant zombie. The mutant zombie was battered around by the sticks that Sam and Nick had so it ran away. In the mutant zombie’s quick retreat it dropped something. It was the last ingredient, bones! Sam and Nick high-fived and ran home to the ruins of their town.

When they reached the ruins of their town they went straight to Sam’s home to revive his mum. When they reached Sam’s house Sam and Nick went to Sam’s room and mixed the ingedients up in a big bowl. They put the potion in the empty water bottle and poured some over his Sam’s mum. Sam’s mum slowly started to get up and move. Sam hugged his mum and his mum hugged him back. After that they all went to where Sam’s dad worked and tried to find him. After about one hour they found Sam’s dad on a piece of rubble. Nick poured the rest of the potion on Sam’s dad. Sam’s dad started to stir and sit up. Sam and his mum hugged him and Sam’s dad hugged them back.

Two years later Sam and Nick were playing soccer against Sam’s dad and mum in their new backyard. They had left the past behind them and gotten on with normal life. They are just normal people in a new town. Twenty years later Sam and Nick got married (not to each other!) and had kids. They all lived happily ever after.

The End :)

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‘Dad! Come watch me!’’ Emerald said doing a new dance she

learnt in  school, ‘Wow!’’ Her dad Tommy exclaimed. ‘Blue, come! One day you’ll be good enough to dance like this’’ Tommy said joyfully. ‘No, I really  don’t like dancing. I can rather spend my time ... Look their is a duck! I’ll get bread to feed it!’’ Announced Blue ignoring  Tommy and walked away.

Emerald looked at Blue who was busy looking at a hummingbird fly the the trees and eat bread which Blue had given her. Emerald walked over to Blue and said ‘The bird so dosen’t like bread’’ Emerald said. ‘’Well according to my books they do. I have many many many reasons but you are not interested in animals so you won’t understand.’’ Blue said trustfully. ‘Uh! But I got 10/10 in t-the fashion competition. ‘Being good at fashion does not mean you will be good at....  knowing if birds like bread’’ sneered Blue. ‘’But still’’ said Emerald  walked inside their home.

‘’Emerald, Shark! Blue and Eight come to dinner!’’ said Tommy. ‘Dad? Can I ask you a question?’’ Shark asked doubtfully. ‘Sure!’’ Tommy said gladly because his son Shark never asks him questions. ‘’You know Blue and Eight moved in.... Yea. Isn’t this house to crowded for 5 people to live in? Maybe They both should leave. Its too squashy. You care about Emerald and me right?’’ Shark said hurriedly. ‘’Shark, Don’t you see they don’t have a home? Plus we have plenty of room here’’ Tommy said.  ‘Really?’’  Emerald asked. ‘We only have 2 bedrooms, 2 bedrooms! And only two beds! And we have to take turns sleeping on the floor?’’ Emerald said trying to be smart.  ‘’Emerald! Don’t be mean’’  hissed Eight. ‘Yea! Emerald is correct’’ declared Shark. ‘’Stop!’’ Blue said with a bag of bread in her hands. ‘’Just eat, we have got 2 pieces of bread and  4 eggs and um lets see 2 cucumber’’ Tommy said. ‘’I want egg, bread and cucumber! Its saved!’’ Shark said. ‘No we all need to eat’’ Tommy said.  ‘I ‘ll sort it out’’ He said.  ‘’Okay Emerald you get a bread and a egg, Shark you get a egg and a cucumber, Blue you have a egg and a cucumber, Eight you get a Bread, And i’ll have egg’’ Tommy said. ‘’Ewww! How do you expect me to eat a Cucumber with Eggs!’’ Yelled shark. ‘’Well, Blue is eating it’’ Tommy said. Shark grabbed his plate and sat furiously. ‘’Um, I think we need to get more groceries.’’ Blue said. ‘Okay then here, all of you get $3.20 each.’’ Tommy said. ‘’Oh! We always get bad stuff’’ Emerald said snatching the money. ‘’Emerald don’t be mean to Tommy’’ Blue and Eight said.

When they got there  they shopped a few items, Shark got help with his maths. They were excited when they got home. Blue was most happy.  ‘’Okay put your things in the fridge.’’ Tommy said. Emerald bought a muffin for $2.50 and a lolly pop for 70 cents. Shark bought A Cookie for $2 and bought a 5 pieces of sushi for $1.20, Eight bought 4 apples, 3 mango’s and a lolly pop for $3.20 and Blue bought bird seeds, and 5 peaches for $3.20 cents. ‘’Emerald you wasted $3.20 for food that will only last 24 hours!’’ Blue said.  ‘’But you bought Bird seeds for $2.50!’’ Emerald said. ‘’But the budgie will be hungry and plus,I bought fruits’’ Blue said very truthfully. Emerald bit her muffin and before they reached home the pink frosted muffin was finished. ‘’Told you’’ Whispered Blue to Emerald.

‘’So. Shall we play?’’ Shark asked Eight.  ‘Um, Okay then!’’ Eight said freely knowing that Shark would not ever ask to  play unless he had a plan to make Eight loose, but Eight always wins even if he  purposely runs slow he always wins so Eight just went with it.

‘’Okay when I say go we both run and get those bags and run back and who ever goes first in  the ULTIMATE winner’’  notified Shark having a very mean plan in his mind. While Eight clearly knew that Shark had another very mean plan in his mind and Eight did not mind a bit. ‘’Okay ready steady go!’ yelled shark already half way through the line cause he ran before he had said ‘Go!’ Eight ran and like always won once again with Shark feeling ashamed as always...


To Be Continued

part 5 series 2(herobrines revenge)

Me,jack and bob all came back from collecting gold nuggets and gun powder to find that our house had been destroyed all that remained was a crater where our house had been there was a portal in the middle of the crator me jack and bob jumped in.

When we got through it was an arena made of nether brick and nether rack.It was herobrines doing and there was rhys traped in a cage floating high above the arena he yelled out to us and told us that herobrine blew up our house and built the portal.he threw down three guns and yelled you can use these to kill herobrine once and for all  we grabed them and loaded them with the gun powder and golden nuggets then he threw us a smaller tube with glass in each end and a much longer tube that screwed onto the end of the guns barrel he threw down three of each we put the smaller tube on top of the gun and looked through it we could see things far away we put on the longer tube our guns looked awesome eh told us that if we shoot herobrine with these it can definatley kill him.So we all grabed our flint and steel lit the string and aimed at herobrine we all shot at him at the same time we hit him and he turned into a puff of smoke and we herd him yell aahh! you will have to hit me more than once though he flew up and we saw him he was half zombefiyed we all shot again we hit him he yeled again and shouted uh what are those thing he fell to the ground in front of me i walked up to him and pointed my gun at rhys's cage and said "it's a gun" BOOM!  i shot at the cage rhys was in it fell to the ground making a huge hole herobrine fell into the ground and vanished in a puff of smoke.


We all of a suden all woke up and realized it had all just been a horible night mare we had all pased out in the living room.All of a sudden we all herd an explotion come from the kitchenwe went there and the kitchen was on fire and the the furnace had been blown up we all poured water buckets on it's crumbled ruins and the fire went out some one had put gun powder and a bottle in the furnace.We all looked at Rhys he said that he was trying to use hi powered explotions and lightning in a bottle to supper charge our furnace and got so sleepy doing it that he left it on when we all came we must of been dazed by the lightning and nocked out.The lightnig must of reacted with the gun powder and made it explode and the lightnig must of of caught the kitchen on fire well at least it is fixed now come on lets go outside.There was grave and it said herobrine 1910-2013 he was an evil man cause of death: by gun.we all just placed a bit of tnt on the grave and blew it up this time we don't want that to happen again i think that we did get nocked out and herobrine used that opertunaty to try and kill us but we killed him.Come on lets just go for a walk in the meadow and we should fell better soon.

part 4 series 2(herobrines return/rhys's invention)

we had just finished mining the diamonds and got back to the house and rhys and bob went out and told us to meet them at the mine in a 5 minutes.We went there and to our horror there was a grave printed on it there was the words herobrine:1950-2013.We were just about to start investigating when rhys and bob jumped out blablablablalbla booooooo they yelled we both stumbled and fell back.Rhys! bob! what the heck.We built this to scare you and it totally worked come on we will get rid of this in the morning for now come to the house so we can go to bed.During the night a thunder storm started and the clouds started to swirl To make it more realistic and bealivable bob and rhys put rotten flesh and bones in the grave latter that night lightning struck the grave.A hand shot up from the ground  and then HEROBRINE jumped out herobrine was reborn and he wanted revenge.


The next morning we all woke up and it was a beautiful day but when we looked around i  the house we noticed rhys was no were to be seen we went outside and he was pouring gun pouder and gold nugets into a metal tube with a hand grip on the end there was a piece  of string coming out the same end as the grip it was open at the oposit end.He explaned  to us that when he used flint and steel to light the string it would make the gun powder explode and fire the gold nuggets  he aimed it at a sheep and lit the string and it worked  the gold nuggets went flying at the sheep so fast we couldn't see them and the sheep died.I call it a gun said rhys it's a rough model but it works and it's quite powerfull to.I've allso been shaping iron to make what i call a sight it makes it easyer to aim this thing.Well now would be a good time to use it there a creper comeing rite at us boom yeah and it's kind of loud well at least we have it now we can kill monsters easilly.I will get to work on making more for now you guys need to get me some more gun powder and gold nuggets.

Minecraft In Hardcore Part 2: Through The Night

After that death by the creature known as the creeper, Steve decided to quickly do everything that he did last time before night approached once again.  Steve hurried and built the crafting table, then he made a small survival hut out of the leftover planks he had.  "There, finished, it's not the best of all houses but at least I'll be safe in this" Steve said placing his crafting table in a corner.  Though Steve had finished his house, he forgot one important thing to the house, the door.  "Night time, well nothing will get me but I feel like I'm forgetting something" Steve wondered, what had he forgot from his house.  Steve heard zombies coming towards his house.  "Thats it, thats what I forgot" Steve said pulling out six planks.  He finally had it "I forgot the door" Steve quickly made and placed the door down.  "There, now I should be safe" Steve was so relived but suddenly he heard a bang and another and another.  "What's that" Steve wonders.  He goes to his door and all he see's is a hoard of zombies banging on his door trying to destroy it.  Steve rushes to his crafting table and places a stick and two planks in an order that makes the shape of a sword.  And thats what he got "yes, just what I wanted" as he picked his new wooden sword up, the zombies smashed the door down and went after Steve.  One zombie had an iron shovel and the other three had leather caps.  "Oh, so you guys have something of your own also, well I'm still gonna kick your..." CHOMP "OUCH"  the zombie had bitten Steve just like his first encounter, but this time he fought back.  Slice after slice, bite after bite, Steve was victorious in his battle to kill the zombies that invaded his home.  "Wow, I can't believe I killed those zombies, I'm lucky infections don't spread"  Steve was also lucky that most of the zombies were going to the village near his house and the green creature's also known as creepers which Steve has now learn't are all in the desert near his house.  But three figures still remained, one a pale figure made entirely out of bones, with no flesh or skin, no organs and carried a bow, the second figure was a tall black creature that came from a place called the end with glowing purple eyes, and purple particles that followed and circled it, it is neutral even to it's leader but no one dare stare at it's dark black head or the consequence will be that your fate is death, it teleports with ease and also opens it's mouth and lets out a terrifying noise, the final figure was something Steve knew easily, it was one of the simplest creature's Steve could know, the spider, it was neutral at morning but dangerous at night and it was about twenty times it's normal size.  Steve did not know this but he soon saw sunlight illuminating the darkness and bringing the mobs to their fate of death all except the creeper, the spider and the tall black creature, but the tall black creature was teleporting everywhere, trying to avoid the sunlight.  "Ok, so right now I'm quite safe until I run into a creeper" Steve took all his stuff and moved to the village.  On the way he killed some sheep and cows for their wool and leather, the wool would be used for a bed and the leather would be used as armor.  Steve made it to the village, he checked everything out, all the houses, all the paths and he even asked what the villagers do.  They showed Steve what they had and Steve said "I'll take it all" but the villagers wanted something in return, one villager wanted thirteen gravel and an emerald for 9 raw pork chops, another wanted three emeralds and a stone sword for an enchanted stone sword that had flame I on it.  "Fine, I'll go looking for this stuff" Steve nagged but there was one more place he didn't look, the blacksmith.  Steve entered the blacksmith and placed all his stuff in there, it was nearly night once again, all the villagers stumbled into their houses and waited for morning to arise.  After Steve set up camp for the night he saw something in the blacksmith, a chest in the corner.  He opened it up and what was in it was amazing.  He found an iron pickaxe, six apples, a chain mail chest plate, an iron sword and a gold ingot.  "Yes, score, now those zombie's and creepers and all those other things are all going to die"  Steve geared up and went out into the night.  "Come out zombies" Steve looked around, zombies were headed for the houses.  "Oh no you don't" Steve rushed towards the houses and killed every single zombie, he got a thanks from the villagers, he really was expecting more but nothing else came from them.  So Steve went back to the blacksmith, made him a bed, placed it and slept through the night.

Reading Challenge

10 facts about L.G

1. I am a filipino (fully)

2. My spelling is 14.3 years old

3.  I am very flexible

4. Over the years I have earnt three gold medals in cheerleading

5. I have only been in New Zealand for 4 years

6. I earnt a distinction for ICAS Spelling

7. I am a Christian

8. I love dancing and singing

9. I spent my first 5 years in the Philippines

10. I love cheerleading!

The scariest animal in the world: Demon Leopard

"Oh my gosh!", I said with shaking knees and hands. " That Demon Leoprad truly is the most scariest and dangerous animal in the world!", I said to my pet dog Lucky as he tried to catch his breath. " You know what Lucky! I could write all the things that I learnt about the Demon Leopard after that disgustingly horrible experience", I said while I was trying to pull out my diary and pen but there were so many survival knick knacks that I brought with me inside my bag that it took me a whole 10 minutes to find my diary and finally I found it and I started.....

9:43 pm Place: Unknown Date of writing: 11/11/13
Dear Diary,  
     Oh my golly gosh!Did you know that I was almost eaten whole by a Demon Leopard and know my hair is mucked up and my beautiful camoufladge heels are now covered in mud!, but anyways I only had  a 1% chance of surviving and guess what?... I survived and basically im somewhere in the woods and im lucky enough that I had my pet, Lucky (See what I did there?)I am also lucky enough that the Demon Leopard accidentally got hit by a tall tree and it hurted that Demon Leopard pretty badly so it got a horrible wound  so I survived luckily and all I need to do now is to escape this place

Oh! and also if anyone finds this diary there are some things that you need to really know about a DEMON LEOPARD.

1. It is the most scariest animal in the world (Maybe even in the Universe!) so never go hiking without a map but I ran so much that I dont know which part of the woods I am in so Yeah!

2. A Demon Leopard can runa nd swim as fast as the speed of light!
Any Demon Leopard can travel more than a thousand miles per minute and when you are caught you are going to be dead meat.

3.It has the best eyesight in the universe
It can see you from a mile away and can see you in pitch black darkness.

4. It can regenerate
It can heal wounds, scars and bone injuries in less than a minute and even when it gets injected with poison it doe not work! and the only way to kill one is when you attack and aim at the wound when it is trying to regenerate a mega large wound because it would hurt more and eventually it would die from the pain since now the wound is really deep inside its flesh.

5. It can hear you and smell you even when your wearing an anti smell clothes and not making any sound.
It is super dangerous to be near a Demon Leopard because if you make the wrong move. BYE BYE life of yours!

and basically that's all you pretty much need to know about that super vicious animal right now and im pretty much losing time I have to escape before they find me.

Good luck for me, 
         Janiz

Teacher machine Writing

Teacher Machine

Ring, Ring. There goes the bell, the start to a new school year. New class, new friends and new teacher. What will they be like? Strict or casual, mean or nice?  No one knows... well except the teacher.

Here I am first time in this classroom, the teacher, Mr. Jack is sitting at the head of the class. He looks like a nice guy, like he's going to help us more than tell us off.

It’s time for maths and I have a hard question. I had sit there for about five minutes when the Mr. Jack came to and asked if I need help I said yes and he started to give me examples of the type of question I was stuck on, he even cracked a few jokes while he was at it. He is really helpful.

Lunch has just finished and I’m really  tired, I was wondering how I was going to be able to get through the rest of the day without falling asleep. Just when I was going to get my stuff out, Mr. Jack announced that we had five minutes of rest. I couldn’t believe my ears he was actually giving us time to rest, it’s like he read my mind.

Well resting time is over and I feel much better, I walk over to get my stuff now I have to do writing the topic is free writing. I decide to write about my new teacher and I start writing. Two hours pass like just two minutes, and before I knew it it was half an hour till the end of the day. Mr. Jack told us to pack up, I wondered what that was for.

I had finished packing up, Mr. Jack told us to line up outside because we’re going to play a game!

My new teacher is the best one I’ve had yet he’s everything I wanted him to be.

THE END