A lady asked me "are you lost?" and I said yes I need to get back home please. Ok the lady said so the lady and I walked through the forest. I made it home. I knocked on the door, my mum was surprised I came safely home.
The End
Thursday 11 April 2013
BUBBLES
Bam the door went flying open as I ran out blowing bubbles. In one big blow I made the biggest bubble that I could. I wanted to pop it so I tried to pop it but instead I went flying up far away to a little place call Don Hill. Then it pop. My family was worried, they heard the news.
A lady asked me "are you lost?" and I said yes I need to get back home please. Ok the lady said so the lady and I walked through the forest. I made it home. I knocked on the door, my mum was surprised I came safely home.
A lady asked me "are you lost?" and I said yes I need to get back home please. Ok the lady said so the lady and I walked through the forest. I made it home. I knocked on the door, my mum was surprised I came safely home.
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Great work using an onomatopoeia to begin your story. I'm looking forward to reading your next piece of writing where you use great hooks like that!
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