Tuesday 6 August 2013

imaginative writing.



The minuscule alien dog ate the transparent yet colorful banana.These bizre and outrageous bananas are grown in water in amoist underground cave.One the banana grower fell asleep and the bananas became sour and feirce in taste they also became very ponderous and heavy.One day they became explosive and blew up the tunnel of a cave.It became very unsturdy and collapsed in on it self.

2 comments:

  1. Really imaginative use of some tricky words!

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  2. Hi i like your use of descriptive language. http://melvilleroom6.blogspot.co.nz/

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