Fairy falls was amazing
As we sat there having our morning tea
It had a incredible view
Rivers going over heaps of stones
Young year fives were making a commotion while we were coming back
Felt steaming hot while walking up the steep hill
And everyone was sweating and some were moaning
Leaves were falling gently down the track while walking down
Little ferns were growing slowly and we saw some sliver ferns
Sometimes we saw brown ferns and there were more brown ferns than green ferns
I love the way you wrote; "Young year fives were making a commotion..." I could imagine them chattering as the tramped through the bush.
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I could still see that they were making a big commotion it was so loud my ears hurt!
ReplyDeleteHi PR great writing I liked the part that you written about Tiara and mum adopting a pet and the funny part was when Tiara said ''Cats are too lazy''
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