Yesterday the year 5 and 6 went to Fairy Falls. We got there we had to find our parents. Then we went off in the forest.
See:
We saw leaves and trees and lots of other classes. The best thing we saw was the waterfall. It was going down. There was another waterfall and another one and then it ended by the stream. We tried to go across the stream with the help of our parents.
A spider was on Maceo's hat. We put it down on a leaf and the spider went away. It was so funny.
Heard:
We heard leaves blowing from the trees and we heard some water run down the fairly falls.I heard lots of people talking.I also heard bird in the tree chirping.
Fairy Falls sounds like a magical place to visit. I haven't heard of it before? Is it close to your school?
ReplyDeleteMrs McGhie
Great writing Adam, I loved the way you included more detail by thinking about what you saw and heard. It was pretty funny when Maceo had a spider on his hat. He was very calm about it though!
ReplyDeleteMiss Signal
I liked your story Adam. It sounds funny when Maceo had a spider on his hat. I am guessing that you had lots of fun at fairy falls!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHollie (Adams sister)